I think I just undercut something fun in a future scene, but I guess I can do without it. It was a clever reveal but I think this moves the story forward better and faster. We'll see when we get there.
Running Total: 18527 Words.
In Today's Pages: Karla extracts a promise.
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Looks like you had a great day- fun movie, delicious food, exciting writing! What could be better? Keep it up and good luck!
Yeah, though I am still mourning the loss of a moment where George unwittingly reveals some of himself to Karla. It's just a little poignant comedy moment, but I liked it.
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