Wednesday, May 12, 2010

More rewriting

I just realized that I will need to rewrite Chapter 3 again before I go on to Chapter 5. The first chapter kind of makes a promise to the reader about the George and Gwen subplot. Gwen is a complication that has totally overwhelmed George's life.

So the man who does too much has got to do more than just a little planning.

Feh. But that's why I'm starting over at this point.

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