Finished the editing, but I did some tricky rewrites in the next to last chapter, so I think I need to let it cool and go over that part one more time on Sunday.
I also started sketching out the catalog copy, and my alpha reader got back to me.  She hit me over the head with a hammer and told me I left out a key point.  (But...but...but, I was trying to avoid spoilers.  NOTE TO SELF - hiding your light under a barrel does not keep the reader in suspense.  It just keeps them from seeing the good stuff.)
What I realized is that the pitch has to explain the title.  I've got some phrases, but I probably won't have it ready until tomorrow.  I'll post the second version here for feedback tomorrow or Sunday.
 
 
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That's a good point. Ugh...pitches. Not my favorite kind of writing. :)
Elizabeth
Mystery Writing is Murder
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